Ocean

Melodious surf
Lapping the pebbly sand
Deceptively calm

 

7/28/15 update: Shared today for the dVerse Poets Pub prompt on nature.

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20 Responses

  1. Oh, now this is very good. You’ve completely mastered the turn from the first two lines to the last. A haiku master, to be sure.

  2. AH, the rhythm of the ocean is definitely restorative. It is like a meditation in and of itself, just listening to it lap the shores. Nice change of scenery.

  3. See? Beautiful choice of words….melodious and lapping…..definitely can’t go wrong with Hawaii and the ocean 🙂

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