Melodious surf
Lapping the pebbly sand
Deceptively calm
7/28/15 update: Shared today for the dVerse Poets Pub prompt on nature.
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they did not love their lives so much
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Oh, now this is very good. You’ve completely mastered the turn from the first two lines to the last. A haiku master, to be sure.
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Thank you! I’m new to haiku, but I do like to do them they way they are supposed to be done (most of the time).
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the world beneath the waves is wonderful, and the sound of the sea, a blessing. Lovely senru
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oh yes, those waves seem so calm, and yet they contain so much power. Beautiful haiku!
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def love the simplicity and calmness of this
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Oh yes.. without the biggest
waves the
smallest
calm
will never
be..:)
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turmoil underneath ??? 🙂
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Well, if the sharks and rays I saw from the submarine at 100 ft deep count, then most definitely yes. 😉
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“Deceptively calm” key to unlock the oceanic character…
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I have experienced that…and miss it!
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I was just there a couple of weeks ago and I miss it already.
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Lovely and peaceful….ocean waves are hypnotic.
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the calmness may be on the surface only…sometimes we have to watch for deeper storms
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Oh, yes! lovely
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Strong, beautiful, & lovely! Cheers!
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Yes, deceptively calm, as we are at times. Lovely lull of ocean waves.
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That last line describes the ocean very well: Deceptively calm
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Such a delightful depiction of the ocean 😀
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AH, the rhythm of the ocean is definitely restorative. It is like a meditation in and of itself, just listening to it lap the shores. Nice change of scenery.
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See? Beautiful choice of words….melodious and lapping…..definitely can’t go wrong with Hawaii and the ocean 🙂
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