I See God

I’m going to pretend that this rain
in the lane
Heralds the arrival of spring
when birds sing
As through this long winter I trod
I see God
The robin finds worms in rain-soaked sod
More death and winter the nightly news portends
Yet new life and spring my dear Christ forfends
In the lane when birds sing I see God


Just had to write a second Ovillejo for dVerse Poets Pub.

About Linda Kruschke

I am a Jesus Freak, and I don't care who knows it. I am a wife, mother, sister, aunt, daughter, and friend. My blood family is only part of the larger family of Christ that I belong to. I love to write, especially about my dear Savior.
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18 Responses to I See God

  1. sreejaharikrishnan says:

    Lovely….nature and hope are two dear words!

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  2. SMilEs.. my friend..
    i did not speak
    until age four..
    how fortuNate
    am i to
    to God
    at age 3..
    and sTill
    above.. so
    below.. all around
    me now.. alWays
    God alwaYs NOW..:)


  3. Sumana Roy says:

    so beautiful…we only need that eye to see Him everywhere…

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Bodhirose says:

    You went for a second one, Linda, and you did great. It is a fun one though challenging.

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  5. Debbie says:

    Oh this makes me smile and sing!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. lynn__ says:

    Beautifully executed, Linda…and a new (old) word for me (forfends)!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Waltermarks says:

    He’s working daily, no doubt, rain or shine. Thanks for heralding God’s unfailing love

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  8. I think nature is our best friend .. even in the darkest of winter.

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  9. Grace says:

    I am looking forward to that spring arrival ~ An inspiring poem to read today~

    Good work on the form too Linda ~

    Liked by 1 person

  10. whimsygizmo says:

    Oh, this is just beautiful. A fine, fine example of the form.
    I see my Creator in nature, too.

    Liked by 1 person

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