I Do Not Care

I ponder often what is true
I do
Of what can’t be changed I dare
not care
Never desiring to stumble and fall
at all
Finding myself back to the wall
Life will be easier once I die
but I must confess this to be a lie
I do not care at all

________________

The lesson for a new poetic form is offered up at dVerse Poets Pub by Whimsygizmo today. It’s a fun Spanish form called the Ovillejo. I just had to give it a try. Head on over for the lesson and to read some wonderful poetry, some whimsical and some more serious, in this wonderful form.

About Linda Kruschke

I am a Jesus Freak, and I don't care who knows it. I am a wife, mother, sister, aunt, daughter, and friend. My blood family is only part of the larger family of Christ that I belong to. I love to write, especially about my dear Savior.
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26 Responses to I Do Not Care

  1. sMiLes..
    greaTest
    gift God
    gives uS
    iS caRinG..
    sadly.. not all
    folks practice thiS
    gift.. or even have
    iT@
    aLL..:)

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Sumana Roy says:

    what a clever and fun twist at the end…very enjoyable lines…

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Bryan Ens says:

    Nicely done. A great mix of anticipating Heaven, but still having a few worries. Very honest.

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  4. Debbie says:

    Wonderful, Linda! I love how you dive into these form challenges!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. vbholmes says:

    Good rhythm here, and your words show a mastery of the form.

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  6. Bodhirose says:

    Your “confession” at the end feels sweet, maybe a little wistful in your caring. Good work, Linda. 🙂

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  7. Wow!! Yours just works so well. I think you got the essence of this form!

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  8. A lie, a mask… really it’s our attitude. Great example.

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  9. Candy says:

    a lie or not, the twist at the end made it fun

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  10. Truedessa says:

    I think you have the form down and it is new to me.
    Life will be easier once I die
    but I must confess this to be a lie

    haha – a little lie here and there…this was fun to read..

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  11. so clever and I’m with you. I do care, too.

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  12. Grace says:

    I admire the twist in the last line ~ Sometimes too much thinking and worrying about the future can be too much ~ Finding the balance is the key ~

    Good work on the form Linda ~ Happy week ~

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  13. ghostmmnc says:

    Very, very good, Linda! It fit the poem structure exactly!

    Liked by 1 person

  14. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Oh gosh you nailed it!! 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  15. Mary says:

    Life may be easier once a person dies, but I am not in a hurry to find out! Smiles.

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  16. whimsygizmo says:

    Linda, this is a strong example of the form! The short staccato lines within lend meaning to your devil-may-care attitude here, also. Well done.

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