Imperfect Me

Though I know I’m deeply flawed
And sometimes I fear I’m a fraud
Grace I do see
I’ve been set free
Because I am loved by God


Day 4 Lesson at Blogging U involves the topic of the imperfect, the form of limerick, and poetic device of enjambment. I think I managed all 3, though the limerick is not traditional in that it’s serious rather than funny.

I am a Jesus Freak, and I don't care who knows it. I am a wife, mother, sister, aunt, daughter, and friend. My blood family is only part of the larger family of Christ that I belong to. I love to write, especially about my dear Savior.


7 Responses

  1. my religious beliefs are a bit different, but I would like to say I love the first two lines and sentiment, and I think it’s a very common experience. So it’s good to see faith and belief (in whatever) helping to overcome those feelings.

  2. I am so (beyond) glad to see the numerous poems being written about Jesus in our class (Writing 201) It is a powerful quiet move of God. Hope to keep up with you 🙂 Blessings.

    • He is one of my favorite subjects. I’m hoping to find time over the weekend to read more of other’s poems so I will look for the ones about God. Peace, Linda

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