“Pick a different word,” she wrote
“This word appears 44 times in this manuscript.
Use your thesaurus.”
So I change pain to anguish or misery
Substitute torment for suffering
Replace anger with outrage
Switch adore for love
Editing is about changing
yet saying the same
De Jackson is calling for some change dVerse Poets Pubfor the first Quadrille Monday of the year at . With editing on my mind—having just yesterday finished addressing my freelance editor’s comments to my memoir manuscript—I thought this was a perfect Quadrille word. Head on over to dVerse to see what other changes are happening.