Words from Above – A Poem

The prompt at dVerse Poets Pub yesterday (and still there today) is to write a poem about our thoughts on the failure of language to capture our thoughts and feelings. I immediately thought about the challenge of writing a poem to a specific form, though the poem I penned isn’t to any set form but the one that came to me as I wrote.

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Words from Above

Writing poetry to form
Struggling to make words conform
To meter and rhyme
A set scheme of repeating lines
Yet still sound sublime

It’s a challenge I love
Splendid words come from above
When self I dethrone
And don’t rely on my own
Desiring God be known

Still language falls short
His grandeur words distort
The best I can do
Is share what I know to be true
To touch a heart or two

I am a Jesus Freak, and I don't care who knows it. I am a wife, mother, sister, aunt, daughter, and friend. My blood family is only part of the larger family of Christ that I belong to. I love to write, especially about my dear Savior.


12 Responses

  1. How true. Writing a poem is a challenge and the satisfaction one gets from hurdling that challenge is priceless.
    Sometimes, like you, I wish to write a God-themed poem but I find that words are inadequate to contain the greatness that is God. So, I stop, instead of listen to that voice beyond mine. 🙂

  2. I also find that writing to a form is a challenge. I found it really daunting and it took me a while to attempt it. I enjoyed the honesty and humility of your words. I can say that you have touched my heart with this poem.

  3. I love it when He writes the poems with us, especially those tough form ones! Thanks for roughing me with your poems! God bless!

  4. Oh yes, writing form poems is definitely a challenge! But when it is accomplished it is definitely a beautiful thing. I think our language always may fall a little bit short by our own standards, but oftentimes it does touch people. And that is something to be celebrated indeed.

  5. form is def not my fav, i prefer the wildness of words
    and setting ourselves aside, and heeding him/his thoughts
    and tending his sheep, are def high callings

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